Week 2 of 10 · about 20 minutes

Thesis in one sitting

This week in one line: any question, to a sentence you could defend, in under five minutes.

The 20 minutes

From question to arguable thesis

Last week you learned to read the question like a marker. This week you answer it, fast, with one sentence that takes a position. That sentence is the spine of the whole essay, and it is worth practising until it comes out in minutes, not agonised over for twenty.

about 3 min

Warm in

Say back last week's move: the three question shapes, and the invitation word. Then one quick sort: Nat reads two questions aloud from the question bank, you name each one's shape before she finishes the sentence.

about 12 min

The work: arguable, then three goes

First, the idea (about 3 minutes). A thesis is not a fact and not a summary. It is a claim someone could push back on. If nobody could disagree with your sentence, it is a restatement, not a thesis.

Restatement · wins nothing

Jealousy is an important theme in Othello and it causes a lot of problems.

True, obvious, and nobody could argue with it. It repeats the question back.
Arguable · wins marks

Shakespeare presents jealousy as something manufactured and weaponised by Iago, not a natural response, so the tragedy springs from Othello's readiness to believe rather than from any betrayal.

A position. Someone could push back, so there is something to prove.
The quick test: could a smart person disagree? If yes, it is a thesis. If no, it is a restatement. Say your sentence out loud and ask it every time.

Then, three goes at plan-in-three (about 9 minutes, roughly 3 each). A plan-in-three is tiny: read the question, write your position in one sentence, then jot three reasons you could grow into paragraphs. No full sentences needed for the reasons.

Question
Which shape is it, and what is the invitation word?
Position
One arguable sentence. Run the disagree test.
Three reasons
Three dot points that would each become a paragraph.
1
"What does the play suggest about jealousy?"
Do this one in the thesis station below, together. Talk it out first, then type.
2
"Analyse the significance of Iago in the play."
Josh drives this one. Nat only asks the disagree test.
3
"Othello is more a victim of Iago than the author of his own downfall. Discuss."
Solo, lightly timed: aim for under 4 minutes, question to three reasons.

In the station: write yours first, then tap "Reveal a strong version" and compare. The gap between yours and the model is the lesson, not a mark.

Rough day? Two goes, not three. A talked-out thesis counts the same as a typed one.

about 5 min

Close it

Say-it-back: Josh explains the disagree test in his own words, as if teaching it to someone else. Then compare his best thesis of the three against the strong version in the station: what did the model do that his did not? Set the phone follow-up below before packing up.

On your phone this week

One more plan-in-three, on a fresh question

5 to 10 minutes, once, any day before next session. Open the question bank, pick any question you have not planned yet, and do the full plan-in-three in your notes app: shape, one arguable sentence, three reasons. Run the disagree test on your sentence. Bring it next week, it becomes the seed for the lever.

The spine Ideas 18 Structure 16 ← this week Craft 11 out of 45 · a sharp thesis is the first Structure mark
from Nat

The whole trick this week is speed without panic. In the exam you get about five minutes for this, so we practise it small and often until a thesis in one sitting feels normal. Rough is fine. Arguable beats beautiful every time.