Week 3 of 10 · about 20 minutes

The lever

This week in one line: stop naming techniques, start saying what they do. That one move is where the marks live.
The 20 minutes

Quote in, analysis out

The whole session is one skill: the three-step lever from the essay page. Spot it, work out the effect, say so what. We watch it work once, then you drive.

about 3 min

Warm in

recall, no pressure
  • Say back last week's thesis move in one sentence
  • Look at the lever ladder: naming, effect, analysis. Which rung wins the marks?
  • Name the three steps out loud: spot it, effect, so what
about 12 min

The work

watch one, then run two
  • Nat walks the lever once on the model quote below
  • Then you run it on two Act 1 to 2 quotes from your quote bank
  • Finish each run with the one-sentence formula from the lever

Rough day? Watch Nat's run, then do one quote instead of two. One good lever beats two tired ones.

about 5 min

Close it

say it back, set the phone task
  • Say the three steps back without looking
  • Pick your strongest sentence of the day and say why it beats naming
  • Set this week's phone task (below)

Watch it work once

Nat runs the lever on this line, the same one the model paragraph on the essay page is built from. Watch for the three moves: the choice, the effect, the so what.

“O, beware, my lord, of jealousy; it is the green-eyed monster which doth mock the meat it feeds on.”
Iago · from the quote bank · jealousy
1 · spot it2 · effect3 · so what
Then you drive

Your two quotes, both from the early acts you already know. Run the full lever on each, ending with one written sentence.

“I am not what I am.”
Iago · Act 1 · deception
1 · spot it2 · effect3 · so what
“Reputation, reputation, reputation! O, I have lost my reputation, I have lost the immortal part of myself.”
Cassio · Act 2 · reputation
1 · spot it2 · effect3 · so what

Stuck on either? The tap-to-reveal cards in the quote bank hold the technique and the effect to analyse. Have your own go first.

On your own

On your phone this week

5 to 10 minutes, once, any day

One more lever run

Open the analysis station on the practice page (station 2, "Push a quote up the lever"). It hands you a quote from the bank. Write one sentence of real analysis, your own version first, then reveal the strong one and spot the gap. One quote, one sentence, done.

Open the practice page →
The spine Ideas 18 Structure 16 Craft 11 out of 45 · this week feeds Ideas, the biggest slice